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Send your boys to Camp Greenlake!

We have been writing persuasive posters/ leaflets to encourage judges in Texas to send their 'bad boys' to be made into 'good boys' at Camp Greenlake.

Have a look at what we have written. Some of us were challenged by changing the 'voice' and audience of our writing and making Camp Greenlake sound like an amazing place to go to. This was to persuade the boys themselves to choose Greenlake rather than prison. 

This is a small selection, but they have been chosen as the children who wrote them impressed me with the effort they put into using all the persuasive features we learnt about as well as independently revising and proof reading.